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artyartie ([personal profile] artyartie) wrote2007-04-24 06:46 pm
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Drabbles: Body

Two drabbles (one Vorenus and Pullo, one Tiro and Cicero) for this week's [livejournal.com profile] rome100 prompt, Body. Spoilers for 'De Patre Vostro' and 'Philippi.'



Pullo fills every moment of the agonizing journey home with chatter. His son is silent and sulky. Vorenus is-

He’s alive, he’s awake, and even if Vorenus doesn’t have the strength to talk, he can listen.

Pullo doesn’t finish Gaia’s story until they reach the sea. He tells Vorenus about his girls, slender and dark as wheat, in the hold of a leaky ship. Tales of sultry Egyptian nights warm the cold mountain passes.

Pullo’s voice is scratchy as sand by the time they’re home, but this only gives him hope. Silence would mean he was bringing home a corpse.

**

Tiro’s hands shook as he slid a coin into the mouth and closed it, gently. They had washed the body, cleaned the mortal wound, perfumed the cold skin. Tiro could still smell bergamot on his fingers.

Better than the copper tang of blood, lurking in every breath.

They would burn the body that night, for fear that Antony would come to claim the rest. Tiro, futilely, had draped sumptuous blue cloth across the jagged stumps of the wrists.

Cicero was gone, and only this small, broken body remained. But Tiro stayed, faithful, until he lit the pyre, his head turned away.

[identity profile] schadenkatze.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 12:13 am (UTC)(link)
I love the ambiguity of the first drabble, unsure whether it was Pullo's voice . . . or Vorenus' thoughts I was reading. Wonderful.

And poor Tiro, his beloved Master gone but never forgotten. So very sad. Again, simply lovely.

[identity profile] artyartie.livejournal.com 2007-04-29 04:18 pm (UTC)(link)
*grins* Totally unintentional ambiguity, but I'm glad you liked it.

And thank you - I only wish there had been more with Tiro in the series.

[identity profile] babel.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 03:27 am (UTC)(link)
Ah, the Cicero one was heartbreaking. The little details of the perfume and the cloth over his wrists made it so vivid.

The first one is also very good. Even though I'm not very into those guys, the last sentence got to me.

[identity profile] artyartie.livejournal.com 2007-04-29 04:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Even after his death, there is no shortage of Cicero angst in this series. But thank you - trying to pick the little details was agonizing.

Normally, I'm not tempted to write Vorenus or Pullo, but the prompt seemed like it would work. And last lines - they're like the conclusions of papers. Evil.

[identity profile] cerebel.livejournal.com 2007-04-25 09:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Skipped the first one, but in the second, I really like the image of the stumped wrists -- WOW it stands out. And Tiro -- aww. I bet Cicero appreciates the idea that at least someone misses him when he's gone.

[identity profile] artyartie.livejournal.com 2007-04-29 05:04 pm (UTC)(link)
The wrists were such a powerful, small detail - and it makes me so glad in the show they only them off. I would have just lost it if they cut off his head, too. But yes, at least Tiro misses him.